MY LIFE IS AWESOME
i love my name...I was proud of my name and it was given by my greatest father...
MUHAMMAD AUDI...but some of my friends call me Odie...What a wonderful nickname uh??
i love my daily college life when i woke up in early of morning and started to go to college..
the basic part is when i go to buy a sandwich every single morning while waiting for the class.
i forgot to mention something here..I'm one of the mass comm student in local college
it is the same thing happen to me everyday....
i have a lot of assignments to do...a homework..looking for the right journal and sometimes i need to do my own research..
this is what we call a student life....
AGAIN....
my life is awe
some..i admit it.
some..i admit it.i have a wonderful family and friends
i can say that I'm the luckiest guy in this world because i have them
without them I'll be lonely and my life will be suck
starting from my family,they are the best family that i have.They treat me nicely and care about me.
this life won't be fun without friends.i need them when i was in trouble.i will love them as i love my own family.People who is close to me are my close friends.i love to makes a new friends and i love to communicate with them.i would be appreciate when they are willing to be my friends.
i want a happy moment in my life and i should appreciate my life because life is a precious to me.we must enjoy our life,otherwise we will turn it to miserable life.
every moments i spend my time with my family and friends, I'll make it the best moments in my heart.
lots of love,
odie
hello awesome boy !! keep your way like that -- that's how you can stand your life, and try to be more better to get closed with your environment ; it'll make your life more completely .
ReplyDeleteAWESOME !!
loves,
Joanneeyy
It is quite wordy and you are like going around the bush. This will be hard for the readers to understand what is the message you trying to send out. Quite a lot of the point can't click with the other sentences. Use less words such as "suck" and etc. and work out on your grammar too. Keep it up.
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